No offence to Squirrelboy, but I want to know if he has actually had sex before. When in doubt, have an editor. Xxnx Ultimately, things you need to watch out for are writing tropes wherein people notice more how you write instead of what you did. Oh, you could have just told me then, when sed penis was relevant. Besides, he’s better than My Sis is Irresistable, set in a weird alternate universe where despite not having an incestuous relationship, it’s totally normal for a guy to suggest his sister wants to bang him after she receives confirmation via wet bathing suit that he’s anatomically a male, then her best friend purposefully invades his shower to bang him and inform him that she wants to see her brother and her hook up.
