Just need more practice, I suppose.SwingerReport 2009-09-03 15:53:36Story horny but paragraphs needed. They ALL need work.«1» The only story I ever wrote came out stupidly because every five minutes I’d have to stop and relieve myself. Xnxx.com 4 comments«1»anonymous readerReport 2011-04-23 09:29:18Pretty poor writing with horrible grammar, spelling, and syntax, and a lack of sentence structure and any semblance of paragraphs, proper punctuation and dialog. Or are you now over them? The only story I ever wrote came out stupidly because every five minutes I’d have to stop and relieve myself. 4 comments«1»anonymous readerReport 2011-04-23 09:29:18Pretty poor writing with horrible grammar, spelling, and syntax, and a lack of sentence structure and any semblance of paragraphs, proper punctuation and dialog. They ALL need work.«1» There are many more errors, as well, but the worst offense is inconsideration of your reader who must struggle through your story.
