You have a lot of talent; please don’t take any more shortcuts and cheat everyone involved, including the characters you made us care about.anonymous readerReport 2012-03-09 15:51:56ruined by the end and lack of a proper finish as usual for this writer negative 50«12345» You have a lot of talent; please don’t take any more shortcuts and cheat everyone involved, including the characters you made us care about.anonymous readerReport 2012-03-09 15:51:56ruined by the end and lack of a proper finish as usual for this writer negative 50«12345» Please don’t do it again. Xxx and as soon as we can we will move as far away as we can and never talk to you again.” keep things a little more realistic please the end sucked.anonymous readerReport 2012-07-07 02:25:35That was… 260 comments«12345»Anonymous readerReport 2013-12-15 15:45:51the story was ok not enough character development or background and you fucked up the end.
