As for Stephanie, I thought the story was fine, if poorly written. Xxx That includes grammar, capitalization, and spaces after periods. 6 comments«12»Jeffezy626Report 2019-02-21 10:15:50Is the story ending here or do you intend to continue itanonymous readerReport 2013-02-26 21:46:18The story is amazing but I have some criticism. There is certainly room for improvement, but I like the track you’re on.«12» In all 3 stories there have been “too many” exclamation points. There is certainly room for improvement, but I like the track you’re on.«12» There is certainly room for improvement, but I like the track you’re on.«12» 6 comments«12»Jeffezy626Report 2019-02-21 10:15:50Is the story ending here or do you intend to continue itanonymous readerReport 2013-02-26 21:46:18The story is amazing but I have some criticism. Secondly, get yourself a name that doesn’t sound like someone barfing, “ufdhzsyg”. There is certainly room for improvement, but I like the track you’re on.«12»
