Still a great story line & getting better with each chapter.Anonymous readerReport 2014-01-26 16:07:19Who is Mercedes? xnx I think you need to proof read, missing words, misspelled words, ect..anonymous readerReport 2012-09-27 12:10:21god, i’d love for you to add another male character. That fact is why it’s so difficult to comment. Still a great story line & getting better with each chapter.Anonymous readerReport 2014-01-26 16:07:19Who is Mercedes? I think you need to proof read, missing words, misspelled words, ect..anonymous readerReport 2012-09-27 12:10:21god, i’d love for you to add another male character. I realize that some women may be “turned” toward receiving abusive treatment but the characterization of these two sisters seem to indicate otherwise, especially at such a young age. Still a great story line & getting better with each chapter.Anonymous readerReport 2014-01-26 16:07:19Who is Mercedes?
