i give you a 6/10 for it maybe if you expand ill give you a better rating,READERReport 2007-05-11 00:44:16So so. slow down with it. xnx Otherwise pretty good story. 11 comments«123»READERReport 2007-06-23 05:49:38I should break your fuckin knee caps for that load of shit you call a story…READERReport 2007-05-12 23:00:09could have had more detail, a good base try to expand on it some more. i give you a 6/10 for it maybe if you expand ill give you a better rating,READERReport 2007-05-11 00:44:16So so. Was good though. 7/10READERReport 2007-04-10 19:28:33pretty good but not that good.READERReport 2007-04-06 16:12:47story was kinda rushed. i give you a 6/10 for it maybe if you expand ill give you a better rating,READERReport 2007-05-11 00:44:16So so. Otherwise pretty good story. 11 comments«123»READERReport 2007-06-23 05:49:38I should break your fuckin knee caps for that load of shit you call a story…READERReport 2007-05-12 23:00:09could have had more detail, a good base try to expand
