its too short. Xxnx Better luck next time.«12» Better luck next time.«12» What I did read was okay but I had to stop because it was just too hard to ignore all the little stuff. What I did read was okay but I had to stop because it was just too hard to ignore all the little stuff. 6 comments«12»Anonymous readerReport 2008-09-01 22:06:45the plot is nice but I think u r missing details ! What I did read was okay but I had to stop because it was just too hard to ignore all the little stuff. 6 comments«12»Anonymous readerReport 2008-09-01 22:06:45the plot is nice but I think u r missing details ! hah and again…paragraphsAnonymous readerReport 2008-08-31 00:42:33paragraphs pleasefbaileyReport 2008-08-30 12:44:59You really need to use a spell checker and then you need to proofread your work before submitting it.
