Make a point of leaving the story for a day or two and then proofread it; “too much to a bare” should have been “too much to bear”. Thanks«1» Thanks«1» Thanks«1» Please use your spelling checker, “tounge ring”. Xxx Please use your spelling checker, “tounge ring”. Please use your spelling checker, “tounge ring”. 1 comments«1»podReport 2009-04-03 10:16:19Much better than Part 1. 1 comments«1»podReport 2009-04-03 10:16:19Much better than Part 1. Make a point of leaving the story for a day or two and then proofread it; “too much to a bare” should have been “too much to bear”. 1 comments«1»podReport 2009-04-03 10:16:19Much better than Part 1. Please use your spelling checker, “tounge ring”. Make a point of leaving the story for a day or two and then proofread it; “too much to a bare” should have been “too much to bear”.
