Words were very strange, like using “defiant” instead of “definite” over and over implying it’s not merely a spelling error but some confusion on your part. xnx I note that the commenter didn’t refer us to any works of his/her own. Words were very strange, like using “defiant” instead of “definite” over and over implying it’s not merely a spelling error but some confusion on your part. Please follow up with another story. As I said before – good, creative story. I have two suggestions. Ignore jerk comments. Second, please don’t leave us wondering what the two girls in the bathroom were up to. Thanks for committing your time and effort to the art of writing and keep writing!anonymous readerReport 2013-09-28 20:38:55Yeah, maybe actually finish primary school before attempting to write.anonymous readerReport 2013-09-28 20:18:57Very good story!
