delete and rewrite using a good editor before reposting THEN IT MIGHT BE WORTH READING.anonymous readerReport 2013-06-01 18:21:12Not really much to say that hasn’t already been said. WHAT KIND OF SEXUAL EXPERIENCE DO THEY HAVE. Xxnx YOU NEED A LOT MORE DETAIL AND AND A MUCH LONGER CHAPTER TO TELL THE STORY. personality and character traits, how they interact in normal situations, etc. HOW OLD ARE THEY? It stands good on its own but I’d like to see you edit it and add more. DO THE PARENTS FIND OUT? AS IS THIS WAS WAY TO SHORT AND WAY TO RUSHED AND NEEDS TO BE DELETED.anonymous readerReport 2013-07-15 21:15:41not good this reads like it should be chapter two not one. 12 comments«123»Anonymous readerReport 2013-12-18 20:18:34THE BEST THING YOU CAN DO IS DELETE IT AND START OVER FROM THE BEGINNING. Me personally I give it 3 out of 5 and I

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