I can see that this story has great possibilities. xnx I would find it easy to read if your broke it up a little more. Keep up the good work Mordred.«1234» Keep up the good work Mordred.«1234» 17 comments«1234»Anonymous readerReport 2015-07-18 16:58:51Very good and would like to read more of your next door adventures.Anonymous readerReport 2010-04-15 22:51:12i have no idea why it entered that three timesAnonymous readerReport 2010-04-15 22:50:27Very well written and i hope for the story to move along if you ever get a chanceconstructive criticReport 2009-09-03 05:29:14next door neighbor, right?SiegReport 2008-11-29 17:09:43Pretty Good story like the rest of your work. Keep up the good work Mordred.«1234» I would find it easy to read if your broke it up a little more. Keep up the good work Mordred.«1234» I would find it easy to read if your broke it up a little more.
