Did you have your date to the movies planned for a week, or did you just decide to go to a movie that night? Nice spelling and grammer though.READERReport 2006-01-24 10:05:27too short dude…but overall the story is good
6/10«12» Needs more descriptions all the way from beginning to end…READERReport 2006-01-26 00:59:07you should make a more thourough beginning, tell us what your relationship is with allie, is this a one-nighter, or a serious relationship? Xxnx Also, think about going into further detail when they are fucking. This kind of information is always good. This kind of information is always good. Nice spelling and grammer though.READERReport 2006-01-24 10:05:27too short dude…but overall the story is good
6/10«12» Did you have your date to the movies planned for a week, or did you just decide to go to a movie that night?
