Keep up this kind of good writing!anonymous readerReport 2013-11-04 04:49:03Any Sweat puzzy waiting am gona pumb right nowanonymous readerReport 2013-08-15 16:24:13XXNX. Xxnx A fantastic addition would be the pregnancy of Jenny BY their hermaphrodite friend, Janice!! And this story does not have the unnecessary and unwelcome entry of a fourth person! And this story does not have the unnecessary and unwelcome entry of a fourth person! Also, the descriptions of the sexual activity is hurried and too brief; the writer needs to slow the sex activities while adding more and longer details! And this story does not have the unnecessary and unwelcome entry of a fourth person! BRNAI«12345» The one major negative is this Part II is too fucking short. The much improved grammar, in most every area, made reading this story a pleasure, including the theme and context being much more clear and detailed.
