Your grammar and such was fine though.anonymous readerReport 2012-08-15 21:48:21Love it hope their is a second partanonymous readerReport 2012-08-15 20:20:02I like it, but he is sort of a douche bag. Xxx Good job, i guess. 5 comments«1»anonymous readerReport 2012-08-22 10:16:01The whole point is that he’s a douche, 8/10. This guy is a douche, so I can’t picture myself being in that position. Part 2 could either be good, or a disaster, so take your time, but do write one.anonymous readerReport 2012-08-16 23:14:32He is such a douche! This guy is a douche, so I can’t picture myself being in that position. But i hope there is gonna be a part 2… 5 comments«1»anonymous readerReport 2012-08-22 10:16:01The whole point is that he’s a douche, 8/10. 5 comments«1»anonymous readerReport 2012-08-22 10:16:01The whole point is that he’s a douche, 8/10.
