2 comments«1»anonymous readerReport 2012-08-05 15:19:33Grammer and dialogue in this story were killing me the whole way through, but it’s a decent story.anonymous readerReport 2012-08-05 03:40:28This story got a negative rating from me, because you didn’t finish the story«1» 2 comments«1»anonymous readerReport 2012-08-05 15:19:33Grammer and dialogue in this story were killing me the whole way through, but it’s a decent story.anonymous readerReport 2012-08-05 03:40:28This story got a negative rating from me, because you didn’t finish the story«1» 2 comments«1»anonymous readerReport 2012-08-05 15:19:33Grammer and dialogue in this story were killing me the whole way through, but it’s a decent story.anonymous readerReport 2012-08-05 03:40:28This story got a negative rating from me, because you didn’t finish the story«1» 2 comments«1»anonymous readerReport 2012-08-05 15:19:33Grammer and dialogue in this story were killing me the whole way through, but it’s a decent story.anonymous readerReport 2012-08-05 03:40:28This story got a negative rating from me, because you didn’t finish the story«1»
