I READ YOUR WORK WHEN FIRST POSTED AND HAVE THOUGHT ABOUT IT SINCE. If that wasn’t enough of a disappointment, truth or dare gets thrown into the tired mix. xnx Pathetic.Anonymous readerReport 2015-03-08 13:55:55Picky, picky, picky. CoachAnonymous readerReport 2015-06-27 04:47:47I’ve just recently been reading the author’s running story line. It sounded like they were in high school, especially when the cliched truth-or-dare got thrown in. It has to be pretty bad before you can’t get to the end. Pathetic.Anonymous readerReport 2015-03-08 13:55:55Picky, picky, picky. I READ YOUR WORK WHEN FIRST POSTED AND HAVE THOUGHT ABOUT IT SINCE. Typos are like potholes, they slow or disrupt your journey if they are large or if there are a lot. Just wish i was In on itAnonymous readerReport 2016-01-19 15:23:51Rhiannon57, you have everything you need to improve your writing to a professional level, except: a spell checker, a grammar checker, AND A GOOD
