“Fantasy” tells the reader nothing. Nice going.Anonymous readerReport 2008-10-30 22:00:55i liked it :)Anonymous readerReport 2008-10-30 20:50:50Why do people not use tags? Xxx One has to read the first several paragraphs before even finding out if ‘Terry’ is a boy or a girl. One has to read the first several paragraphs before even finding out if ‘Terry’ is a boy or a girl. One has to read the first several paragraphs before even finding out if ‘Terry’ is a boy or a girl. Would you bother ordering supper if the restaurant menu just said “Food”? Give the readers a reason to click on your story!«1» 3 comments«1»Anonymous readerReport 2008-10-31 23:34:17creative way to narrate the story. Would you bother ordering supper if the restaurant menu just said “Food”? Would you bother ordering supper if the restaurant menu just said “Food”?
