Usually a line between is good enough. Now you only have to read one commentanonymous readerReport 2012-07-22 19:37:43WTF u write smaller chapters so u can post more a week bull shit u havent writen since part 1 get it together and write somethinganonymous readerReport 2012-07-18 15:40:39The story has potential, I’d like to read part 2anonymous readerReport 2012-07-10 22:40:02Btw im alzo77 (just wrote the post) the post before this oneanonymous readerReport 2012-07-10 18:09:31Oh, and also, put more space between your paragraphs. xnx Once again, it just makes the story easier to read. This holds true for dialogue as well. Like I said, walls of text are never fun to read. This holds true for dialogue as well. 310 views and thousands of likes!?press 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 or 9 and thumbs up.I hate ads and I’m thankful that porn doesn’t have them.I pee in the side of




















