4 comments«1»Anonymous readerReport 2008-05-22 19:06:36good story needs more detail though it seemed rushed and over too fast you should space the speach out further but otherwise good storyREADERReport 2007-02-07 18:17:08Great story. …needs to be longer next time!!! Xxx 4 comments«1»Anonymous readerReport 2008-05-22 19:06:36good story needs more detail though it seemed rushed and over too fast you should space the speach out further but otherwise good storyREADERReport 2007-02-07 18:17:08Great story. …needs to be longer next time!!! 4 comments«1»Anonymous readerReport 2008-05-22 19:06:36good story needs more detail though it seemed rushed and over too fast you should space the speach out further but otherwise good storyREADERReport 2007-02-07 18:17:08Great story. …needs to be longer next time!!! gotta be more adventures with these two. gotta be more adventures with these two. please make more«1»
