Keep writing.Anonymous readerReport 2010-07-19 13:34:24ok but to short this was a lousey place to end it also since the mom was home she sure would have heard all the screaming it would have been better if she asked to go camping with him then they screwed at the camp site keep it beleivable and realistic please«1» Even you can start it from now and take your sister to camping and explore some more experiences you would like to share… Xxx 4 comments«1»anonymous readerReport 2013-02-04 10:31:19paragraphs are to long stupid plot and no end all equal a half assed job. 4 comments«1»anonymous readerReport 2013-02-04 10:31:19paragraphs are to long stupid plot and no end all equal a half assed job. Even you can start it from now and take your sister to camping and explore some more experiences you would like to share… 4 comments«1»anonymous readerReport 2013-02-04 10:31:19paragraphs are to long stupid
