Either become better or risk losing your own readers. Xxnx There was also the issue that it became a little difficult to tell who was saying what at times. There was also the issue that it became a little difficult to tell who was saying what at times. You do have a good story here and I think that you can definitely attract a good fanbase with this. But if you keep going about your writing as you currently are, then you’ll never reach that potential. Don’t take the lazy way out and just make excuses all the time. Take your creations seriously as well. They’re not professionals either, yet they constantly make professional level work. Give them the attention they deserve and try to make them the best they can be.
