you added too much detail in the last couple chapters. Maybe Zoe is Bi and her family are swingers?That might tie your story together. Xxnx if so. Zoe needs to tell her side of the story. Zoe needs to tell her side of the story. Just my thoughts. SteveAnonymous readerReport 2014-10-27 19:16:25This the end??Anonymous readerReport 2014-08-31 20:04:22Hey man you writing any more stories keep up the good man«123» 12 comments«123»Anonymous readerReport 2015-08-28 04:27:41Can’t wait till the next oneAnonymous readerReport 2015-08-26 18:47:59Please write some more its really good!steversReport 2014-12-12 09:10:05Is this the end? I loved your story, I hope there is more. if so. Why the details on his fathers family? you added too much detail in the last couple chapters. Why the details on his fathers family? Who is this cousin, why is she here? Zoe needs to tell her side of the story. Just my thoughts. you added too much
