You kept switching between past-tense and present-tense and most sentences weren’t correctly punctuated. Your grammar and punctuation could definitely use some work, though. xnx Your grammar and punctuation could definitely use some work, though. You should write more chapters. I suggest having someone you know has proper grammar and punctuation proof-read it, but if you aren’t down for that, have someone teach you with a different text or look up ways to improve. It’s only important because it makes it a little more difficult to read. I suggest having someone you know has proper grammar and punctuation proof-read it, but if you aren’t down for that, have someone teach you with a different text or look up ways to improve.
Actors:
Ike Diezel / Scarlett Alexis
