You really have to work on your writing. Really, you’re complaining about the spelling and grammar of a comment that you obviously had no trouble reading. Xxnx I never said anything about the spelling or grammar of the story. So like i said really work on your writing and proof read it be for posting. So like i said really work on your writing and proof read it be for posting. All i said was that she should describe things more, to expand some of the scenes and to have some build-up. I never said anything about the spelling or grammar of the story. There was no build-up and no flow. Cya Later:)
Thel20anonymous readerReport 2013-05-10 10:58:11I’m not going to say it was bad but i will say that you really need to start proof reading.
