I know it’s very hard to detect “voice” in these text-only comments, so please understand I’m not being harshly critical; I’m simply giving some friendly advice. Xxx Could have had more following it though.«12345» Please people, either do some proof-reading yourself or get someone who can to do it for you. Please people, either do some proof-reading yourself or get someone who can to do it for you. A little editorial time is well worth the effort! A little editorial time is well worth the effort! A little editorial time is well worth the effort! A little editorial time is well worth the effort! I know it’s very hard to detect “voice” in these text-only comments, so please understand I’m not being harshly critical; I’m simply giving some friendly advice. 24 comments«12345»anonymous readerReport 2013-02-23 17:33:21I am a 16 old boy with a small cock i compare mind
