i have more stories in my head but i am going to continue with the slaver story a littleanonymous readerReport 2013-01-05 00:39:39Great potential. Xxnx may need an editor. Switching from first to third person is troublesome but you are going good with content. I look forward to more.«1» 5 comments«1»anonymous readerReport 2013-05-25 00:58:30you went from first to third person. i have more stories in my head but i am going to continue with the slaver story a littleanonymous readerReport 2013-01-05 00:39:39Great potential. i am not a writer but i am trying. I look forward to more.«1» i am not a writer but i am trying. may need an editor. why? why? i have more stories in my head but i am going to continue with the slaver story a littleanonymous readerReport 2013-01-05 00:39:39Great potential. Switching from first to third person is troublesome but you are going good with content.
