But good story line«12» Awful!!!anonymous readerReport 2012-08-27 00:50:40Your writing is kinda awkward . 7 comments«12»wardgsavenReport 2020-11-28 01:35:11I realize that the story was written years ago, but the changes I talked about would make it so much easier to read. Xxx Awful!!!anonymous readerReport 2012-08-27 00:50:40Your writing is kinda awkward . Awesome.anonymous readerReport 2013-06-02 19:04:47Spell check wouldn’t fix the grammar errors. Awful!!!anonymous readerReport 2012-08-27 00:50:40Your writing is kinda awkward . Awful!!!anonymous readerReport 2012-08-27 00:50:40Your writing is kinda awkward . 7 comments«12»wardgsavenReport 2020-11-28 01:35:11I realize that the story was written years ago, but the changes I talked about would make it so much easier to read. Awesome.anonymous readerReport 2013-06-02 19:04:47Spell check wouldn’t fix the grammar errors. Awful!!!anonymous readerReport 2012-08-27 00:50:40Your writing is kinda awkward . 7 comments«12»wardgsavenReport 2020-11-28 01:35:11I realize that the story was written years ago, but the changes I talked about would make it so much easier to read.
