Will read on…anonymous readerReport 2013-09-05 22:23:505UO9eC Im obliged for the article post.Really thank you! Xxx J.A.G«1» Ken Doesn’t have a job? Break down the sentences into manageable chunks. Break down the sentences into manageable chunks. J.A.G«1» 4 comments«1»Anonymous readerReport 2014-02-28 18:37:478XlROj I loved your article.Much thanks again. And when you brought up Mendy’s new boyfriend who stole everything from her, I had to re-read it to get the wording correct. Ken Doesn’t have a job? If it’s only a fantasy story, make yourself taller, change the daughter’s name to Mindy or Wendy, explain what is wrong with your son (ie Bi-polar or ??)
Not a BAD story – just needs some improvement.anonymous readerReport 2012-08-11 02:18:40For the most part it’s a decent story from what I read but could be better. And when you brought up Mendy’s new boyfriend who stole everything from her, I had to re-read it to get
