Work on writing before you submit anymore, please.anonymous readerReport 2013-09-05 22:46:03Dis strory suck a much dike!!! Xnxx.com So shitty one this strory Chow wan say no more write strory stinkys so like much shit!!!!!anonymous readerReport 2013-09-05 20:19:37Here’s the best constructive criticism I can give you, don’t bother submitting anything else until you learn how to spell, use correct grammar, and have content that doesn’t suck ass!!!!!!!«1» 3 comments«1»anonymous readerReport 2013-09-06 09:58:20The overall premise of the story was good, but it was the presentation that needs a lot of work. 3 comments«1»anonymous readerReport 2013-09-06 09:58:20The overall premise of the story was good, but it was the presentation that needs a lot of work. So shitty one this strory Chow wan say no more write strory stinkys so like much shit!!!!!anonymous readerReport 2013-09-05 20:19:37Here’s the best constructive criticism I can give you, don’t bother submitting anything else until you learn how to spell,
