There is a famous book called “Eats Shoots and Leaves” by Lynne Truss. It’s really bad, just stop.anonymous readerReport 2011-10-30 06:38:27i dont think it was that bad but could be better but please use the whole page when writing your story and i hope there is more to come , so dont stop writing but add a little something thats kinky into your story line«12» There is a famous book called “Eats Shoots and Leaves” by Lynne Truss. Xxnx Please read it. Please read it. It will allow you to see some of the tools of the language we call Standard English.anonymous readerReport 2011-11-02 12:39:17I’m not sure what word processing program you used to write the story with, but I would suggest that you use one with a grammar tool.
