The story is filled with basic, basic errors- starting with your introduction for people to read your other stories. The story is filled with basic, basic errors- starting with your introduction for people to read your other stories. xnx The story is filled with basic, basic errors- starting with your introduction for people to read your other stories. The story is filled with basic, basic errors- starting with your introduction for people to read your other stories. 6 comments«12»bob144333Report 2019-09-15 10:54:41I thought your story was good It was easy to over look any errors by reading between the lines keep your stories comingCockerspanialReport 2015-12-01 10:10:163/4 words: grammer, spelling, improve (much)Anonymous readerReport 2014-02-11 17:57:20There aren’t small items here to correct. The story is filled with basic, basic errors- starting with your introduction for people to read your other stories. Not looking for an English primer but it is challenging to
