910«12» i really liked it and usually i can’t stand these kind of stories. Xxx 910«12» Anything you want to see from any of the characters?READERReport 2007-10-20 00:16:14meh, it was okay… you don’t have very many mistakes at all! you don’t have very many mistakes at all! 8 comments«12»Anonymous readerReport 2008-08-23 21:35:41Well its way better than the other ones. I suggest proof reading it before you publish it.READERReport 2007-10-21 12:31:12I’m working on a second, any tips suggestions? too many grammar mistakes for my taste. Anything you want to see from any of the characters?READERReport 2007-10-20 00:16:14meh, it was okay… 910«12» I suggest proof reading it before you publish it.READERReport 2007-10-21 12:31:12I’m working on a second, any tips suggestions? you don’t have very many mistakes at all! Anything you want to see from any of the characters?READERReport 2007-10-20 00:16:14meh, it was okay…
