20 comments«1234»Anonymous readerReport 2008-06-15 23:15:11This story sucks because you kept fucking up tinas name with beckys!READERReport 2008-03-02 12:32:37my dick got stuffy tooREADERReport 2007-09-14 11:36:48The names were mixed up only the one time–I think. Xxx Gave the story a 7.READERReport 2007-02-21 18:56:08not bad but you keep mixing up becky and tinaREADERReport 2006-06-12 19:16:28the story is good buyt , za charachtraers arre mesced upp itz tina zen becky«1234» It could have been a great story without making the cocks and pussies appear to be machineguns. 20 comments«1234»Anonymous readerReport 2008-06-15 23:15:11This story sucks because you kept fucking up tinas name with beckys!READERReport 2008-03-02 12:32:37my dick got stuffy tooREADERReport 2007-09-14 11:36:48The names were mixed up only the one time–I think. There is too much going on at one time, too many cummins at the same time, and it makes me believe that there is a lot of bullshit in the story.
