You will impress more people with your story telling abilities if you dump the turgid prose of yesteryear and work with colloquila English, American flavored. Xxx Dump those damned exclamation marks! Ponderous.wordytomReport 2008-10-01 18:56:11I am not going to be nice to you. You will impress more people with your story telling abilities if you dump the turgid prose of yesteryear and work with colloquila English, American flavored. Otherwise just use the period and say, “She was excited,” or show it with a description of your actions. Dump those damned exclamation marks! Nice critiques are insincere as a rule. Ponderous.wordytomReport 2008-10-01 18:56:11I am not going to be nice to you. ARE YOU SERIOUS???? The racial stuff might be better handled without the tags like mulatto.
