A bit too short. UR, is really you are. Xxx A bit too short. No character development. As for the story… UR, is really you are. Story line is all right, but once again, too short.«12» It is not difficult to write that way. It is not difficult to write that way. As for the story… As for the story… As for the story… UR, is really you are. No character development. Story line is all right, but once again, too short.«12» No character development. 7 comments«12»Anonymous readerReport 2014-12-02 23:48:09That’s a smart way of thknniig about it.anonymous readerReport 2013-02-06 00:58:07i luved it dont listen to them theyre dickssnowlionReport 2013-02-03 21:07:43That was enough to make blow my loadanonymous readerReport 2012-06-05 23:59:39You should make it longer, describe it moreanonymous readerReport 2012-06-05 16:49:18Please leave the “short strokes” verbiage for your cell phone and use real words when writing a story.
