But I did finish it. Xxx The grammar and spelling were good enough, much better than most others on this site. 1 comments«1»ClyReport 2013-08-23 19:38:00It was OK. I just didn’t get sucked in. 1 comments«1»ClyReport 2013-08-23 19:38:00It was OK. The sex part could have been longer, but then again, I tend to make mine a little short as well. Good job over all!«1» But I did finish it. I just didn’t get sucked in. This story lacked something, and I can’t put my finger on it. The grammar and spelling were good enough, much better than most others on this site. The grammar and spelling were good enough, much better than most others on this site. But I did finish it. This story lacked something, and I can’t put my finger on it.
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