the first chapter was good.. Xxnx Make the switches new chapters or something.Anonymous readerReport 2008-08-05 03:09:55no no no no… this is just confusing.gayboyReport 2008-06-05 00:45:44its to confusing.i dont know who is whoREADERReport 2007-12-24 12:28:23I loved the first chapter. no more incest… Make the switches new chapters or something.Anonymous readerReport 2008-08-05 03:09:55no no no no… it is ruining the story line… the first chapter was good.. the first chapter was good.. 5 comments«1»Anonymous readerReport 2009-03-14 20:58:48Nice twist with the sister being a he/she or he a guy raised as a girl. Just work on making the stories longer and making the transitions make more sense. Just work on making the stories longer and making the transitions make more sense. the first chapter was good.. Make the switches new chapters or something.Anonymous readerReport 2008-08-05 03:09:55no no no no… 5 comments«1»Anonymous readerReport 2009-03-14 20:58:48Nice twist with the sister being a he/she or he a guy raised
