My aim is to make you better. My aim is to make you better. Xxnx 10 comments«12»anonymous readerReport 2013-06-25 16:53:38I had to stop reading and give a neg rating when I got to the part with High School kis with DD tits and 10 inch cock.animal99Report 2013-03-23 00:45:09I liked your story because it’s plot showed a lot of promise. If you want your readers to not flee in disgust when suddenly reality is violated, then state from the beginning that your character will be “super.” Otherwise, when you state it later it seems like a cheap cop out.«12» details are what make it a better story-at least, in my opinion. details are what make it a better story-at least, in my opinion. Think about how you’d tell this story if you were in a room full of inquisitive and like minded people – you’d start slow, and build
