Other than that it was not a bad story.READERReport 2007-03-29 21:51:53stupid story its never acceptable to encourage or condone forced sex its nothing short of rape you assholeREADERReport 2007-03-29 09:12:32punctuation,paragraphs,who is talking?all need attention before you post your next story. Xxnx If you spell a wrong word corectly you spell checker will not correct you so you have to spell the right word corectly. 7 comments«12»READERReport 2007-03-30 13:57:37You really need to read your work over and check all those little words for spelling. If you spell a wrong word corectly you spell checker will not correct you so you have to spell the right word corectly. If you spell a wrong word corectly you spell checker will not correct you so you have to spell the right word corectly.
