Overall a decent story, too bad its in the archives and you’ve not likely posted recently. xnx Thanks for a nice, erotically HOT, and kinky story!!!!!!Anonymous readerReport 2014-08-09 21:08:07total bullshit story. You could also have described what her pussy, asshole, and pee smelled like. You did good, man :DAnonymous readerReport 2016-03-12 04:31:54To the moron who refers to himself as “Reader,” how can you leave out the details and still be descriptive? Hope you see this and decide to write some additional stories using the same theme and activities you included in this story. Your character should’ve had HIS salad tossed in addition to pissing in both of her holes as well. way to stupid, why would he want anything to do with her since she abandoned him for the geek? 28 comments«12345»Anonymous readerReport 2017-02-10 06:26:37Sheesh, some of these reviewers are pretentious dicks. Overall a decent story, too bad its
