keep trying! Xxx I am not going to sugar coat it; your storytelling ability is horrendous. I would suggest having someone proofread before you postDanejarousReport 2011-07-05 20:42:08I don’t know why every time I see your name on a new story I read it. I am not tearing you down or anything, but your style feels rushed and even a quick look-over before posting would benefit your writing. You’re a fucked up person! However, the beginning was strong but then on the end with the sex, you totally let us down. keep trying! 4 comments«1»anonymous readerReport 2011-07-10 06:58:29poor writing and story telling skillsm but good ideas. I am not tearing you down or anything, but your style feels rushed and even a quick look-over before posting would benefit your writing.
