Both the preflude and the actual sex were skillfully described makig the reader feel part of the story.anonymous readerReport 2010-10-29 18:43:33Well constructed, thought out and executed story in American English with a knowledge of word structure and syntax – a very pleasant change. What follwed didn’t even register, really. Xxnx Is English your second language?anonymous readerReport 2011-02-28 05:03:35A great story, well written and so much compassion. What follwed didn’t even register, really. What follwed didn’t even register, really. 8 comments«12»al bellReport 2017-06-18 03:57:09This is a good story but you need to take a course on grammar. I got hung up with the grief process, the compassion. What follwed didn’t even register, really. I guess as far as the writting goes, this should be a complement. Please continue this level of work.anonymous readerReport 2010-10-29 14:27:20Too well written? Is English your second language?anonymous readerReport 2011-02-28 05:03:35A great story, well written and so much
