You’ve crossed a line.READERReport 2006-10-26 00:46:37Write another chapter & have her live with the man while he teaches her all the facets of what sex really isREADERReport 2006-01-13 22:19:19hey reader the hyman is inside a womens vagina dumb ass. if it wasnt how do you think we are able to use tampons before loosing our virginity. Xxnx 8/10anonymous readerReport 2011-10-14 18:02:54dark and disturbing. interesting.Anonymous readerReport 2009-10-15 07:11:36The rape of an underage girl is not my idea of eroticism. 8/10anonymous readerReport 2011-10-14 18:02:54dark and disturbing. 8/10anonymous readerReport 2011-10-14 18:02:54dark and disturbing. it read cold and without emotion, almost done with anger. it read cold and without emotion, almost done with anger. 16 comments«1234»anonymous readerReport 2012-06-12 23:37:07Other than a few disturbing grammer mistakes it was good.
