17 comments«1234»Anonymous readerReport 2016-05-19 17:34:34Your a such a ass go post your own stories if u wanna be critical on some one else project who are you to judge . Xxnx You might try finding a Proof-Reader to help avoid this problem. Even with the little typos this is still an amazing story.Anonymous readerReport 2015-09-23 22:02:35I laughed at myself more than the situation, “I figured that would be the case as I did it to myself but moving too fast through air. no oneAnonymous readerReport 2016-01-21 11:09:00Besides, those are NOT spelling errors but grammar errors, and no spell-checker I know of will find those. Even with the little typos this is still an amazing story.Anonymous readerReport 2015-09-23 22:02:35I laughed at myself more than the situation, “I figured that would be the case as I did it to myself but moving too fast through air.
