Good job though!anonymous readerReport 2012-07-18 15:02:56I liked the Dog part 😀 it adds alittle bit of exoticness. Xxx what i really want to know is how did it feel to have your daddy’s “huge” cock in you.«12345» Its a great skeleton, just put some meat on the bones! still,keep writing. Good job though!anonymous readerReport 2012-07-18 15:02:56I liked the Dog part 😀 it adds alittle bit of exoticness. 31 comments«12345»sexybeccaReport 2013-02-28 19:06:28it was ok but the spelling needs work and the story set up needs more work ober all this can be a good story if its fixed some moreanonymous readerReport 2012-12-09 10:07:41Good base for a story, but it really does need more detail. Good job though!anonymous readerReport 2012-07-18 15:02:56I liked the Dog part 😀 it adds alittle bit of exoticness. Good job though!anonymous readerReport 2012-07-18 15:02:56I liked the Dog part 😀 it adds alittle bit of exoticness. it has a childish tone
