13 comments«123»Anonymous readerReport 2017-01-22 13:06:15Looked for original parts but no banana. xnx Further on you can change it again as things happen to them. Further on you can change it again as things happen to them. I am really looking forward for more … Further on you can change it again as things happen to them. Some writing tips:
Go for an open setting and try to keep the characters believable. (Just be aware that others might think you are really weird in doing that!)Anonymous readerReport 2014-01-06 06:58:07great story looking forward to part 3Anonymous readerReport 2013-12-24 23:36:54Great story. Some writing tips:
Go for an open setting and try to keep the characters believable. Too bad. I know some will get pissed off that there’s no translations: Just as the writer wanted the rest of the family to feel, LOL!
