That is my best advice I can give you. I understand that you are a novice writer and I hope you get better along the way. xnx I thank you for having the courage to make your effort public. It has some very good things but there are things that make me uncomfortable, so as it is a series I am going to give it a try, I am going to continue reading and I will give my opinion when I finish reading, I hope that is at the end of the series. In relation to haters: forget them, none of them has written more than 10 sentences in a row and they only try to prove to themselves that those who do make an effort are as incapable as they are.KarrowReport 2020-05-14 15:07:38Love this story !Anonymous readerReport 2017-01-09 06:35:30What is his new stories called?Anonymous readerReport 2016-11-16 04:01:19You should
