Try to be a little more vivid when you write. Kudos for that I suppose.READERReport 2004-07-16 23:32:53The mother-fucking author did not even edit this piece of shit before posting it. Xnxx.com This story did nothing for me. The spelling and grammar are an insult to my intelligence. Who browses girly magazines where half the pictures are out of focus ? I agree with those people… Who browses girly magazines where half the pictures are out of focus ? A story is supposed to create a picture, until you barely realize you’re reading anymore and you feel like you’re there, watching what’s going on. Kudos for that I suppose.READERReport 2004-07-16 23:32:53The mother-fucking author did not even edit this piece of shit before posting it. Kudos for that I suppose.READERReport 2004-07-16 23:32:53The mother-fucking author did not even edit this piece of shit before posting it.
