The storyline was nice but like I said not enough details.Anonymous readerReport 2008-08-01 03:29:44awsome story 10/10READERReport 2007-09-28 00:14:32cool he should have cryed and begged more but very goodREADERReport 2005-09-12 00:32:29it was an “okay” story, if it was longer it would have been better and i know that this is fiction but making it a little more realistic would help. Xxnx and thats all it is Fantasy. The storyline was nice but like I said not enough details.Anonymous readerReport 2008-08-01 03:29:44awsome story 10/10READERReport 2007-09-28 00:14:32cool he should have cryed and begged more but very goodREADERReport 2005-09-12 00:32:29it was an “okay” story, if it was longer it would have been better and i know that this is fiction but making it a little more realistic would help. also try not to use computer talk such as “omg”READERReport 2005-07-27 19:23:02Chris why are you reading a story marked gay, rape and boy if you don’t like gay
