910«12» 8 comments«12»Anonymous readerReport 2008-08-23 21:35:41Well its way better than the other ones. Grammar is still shit. Xnxx Grammar is still shit. 8 comments«12»Anonymous readerReport 2008-08-23 21:35:41Well its way better than the other ones. 910«12» you don’t have very many mistakes at all! ^_^ good plot line though.READERReport 2007-10-13 10:38:09Thanks I copied and pasted it to word to use spell check!READERReport 2007-10-12 10:43:22you have gotten so much better! you don’t have very many mistakes at all! i really liked it and usually i can’t stand these kind of stories. Grammar is still shit. ^_^ good plot line though.READERReport 2007-10-13 10:38:09Thanks I copied and pasted it to word to use spell check!READERReport 2007-10-12 10:43:22you have gotten so much better! ^_^ good plot line though.READERReport 2007-10-13 10:38:09Thanks I copied and pasted it to word to use spell check!READERReport 2007-10-12 10:43:22you have gotten so much better!
